Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 9:27:31 GMT -5
Creature:Shark Users:Any one with water charkra must be taght by me. Summoning chakra: 100 or 120 to let him breath out of water. Requirments:Chunin, Name:Kotaro Personality:Kotaro is a nice shark who like to eat meat. Loves to race other sharks.Full breed hammer head shark. Is loyal to Jin and some time Sharai(when it counts).He stands for what he thinks is right. Description: Wears a black jacket that says eat or be eaten in chinese.Has red tattos on his face simmilar to Jiraya. The eyes are red. Carries 2 big tonfas like But there made of steel. Strength:60 Defense:40 Agility:50 Speed:64 Mentality:25 Health: 300 Chakra:500 Jutsu:Hitishizuku no Jutsu Water Release: Pressure Cannon Water Element; Water Wave Water Dragon Blast Water Release: Water Shockwave Water Release: Huge Explosion Technique Ice Prison Technique Ice Release: Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm Ice Release: Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique Cost:10,000
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 9:28:05 GMT -5
I just wanted one summoning.
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 10:06:50 GMT -5
I have a good thought this one is good.
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Post by Sharai J. on Jun 8, 2007 16:32:32 GMT -5
How can a Shark do the boulder strike?
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 17:25:20 GMT -5
If the shark runs into the boulder...............
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Post by Sharai J. on Jun 8, 2007 17:30:23 GMT -5
Shut up....you didn't answer my question, How can it do a Boulder Strike?
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 17:32:20 GMT -5
Never mind ill take it out.
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Post by Sharai J. on Jun 8, 2007 17:40:00 GMT -5
How the hell are we cousins, you really don't think, do you? I'mma leave this only for now, Let the other admins look at this...
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 8, 2007 17:45:08 GMT -5
Ok.
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Post by Nakamura [Sumizome Arashi.] on Jun 12, 2007 12:38:31 GMT -5
Looks fine to me, just that the picture kinda freaks me out...0_0
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Post by bioniclefan on Jun 12, 2007 16:59:20 GMT -5
I would add maybe a little more to the personality, and (maybe) add some to the description - does he wear clothes, wield weapons, is he just a hammerhead shark, what? I know a hammerhead wearing clothes and wielding a big sword or something would be a lot scarier than just a hammerhead shark.
Also, the jutsu - aren't the jutsu supposed to be jutsu that the shinobi cannot do him/herself? I know that happened to me (check w/ Aisu). If that's so, then you might have to do some overhauling on the jutsus.
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Juji Jin
Chunin
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A Mist chunin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 12, 2007 18:16:37 GMT -5
Ok Thanks.How about know.
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Post by bioniclefan on Jun 12, 2007 23:05:16 GMT -5
Yeah.... what about the jutsus? I dunno if they can be jutsus that any shinobi can do.... I'd ask Aisu.
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Juji Jin
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Post by Juji Jin on Jun 13, 2007 7:48:30 GMT -5
Ok I will but The summoning toad used human Justu.
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Post by bioniclefan on Jun 13, 2007 11:36:52 GMT -5
Point. However, if you look at the two thus-far approved custom summonings (Bat and Bear Summonses), you'll see the jutsus are not jutsu that any shinobi is capable of using - they are unique to the summons.
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