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Post by astartescorrupted on Mar 28, 2008 12:25:28 GMT -5
The Genjutsu-thing seemed to be going nowhere, so I completely removed it. Btw, you said that kenjutsu and taijutsu count as the same. There isn't anything 'chakra-related' with their kenjutsu styles: they're just some fighting moves.
And Jin, what do you mean by 'put a price on the jutsu itself'? I already did:
750
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Post by Juji Jin on Mar 28, 2008 16:28:37 GMT -5
Oh didn't see that.: o (Tai justu and genjustu counts too.)
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Post by {~| Pastorius |~} on Mar 28, 2008 16:54:03 GMT -5
The meteors in stormbringer don't sit right with me... In fact, the entire thing seems bad since you're basically creating a natural catastrophe. And what do you mean by 750? 750 Chakra, 750 Damage, 750 yen to purchase it in the store?
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Post by Juji Jin on Mar 28, 2008 16:56:12 GMT -5
On that you dont need to put the damage cause the mods in the battle threads would determine it if it hits on point or barely brushing you opponent.
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Post by {~| Pastorius |~} on Mar 28, 2008 23:58:22 GMT -5
Jin, that's really not a good idea at all... The damage should always be put. We can't have mods constantly checking up on threads, that's not right.
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Post by astartescorrupted on Mar 29, 2008 8:25:12 GMT -5
Yes, I am indeed creating a natural disaster. I added the dmg and chakra cost. Look, as you have probably noticed, the chakra cost is too high for any of these techniques, so only one of them would be used in a battle. Using all of them in the same day would be impossible. I think that this balances it a bit. :)
And btw, the taijutsu and kenjutsu are not chakra-related. They are just some fighting styles, nothing like the Hyuga's martail arts that use chakra. And I removed the genjutsu.
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Post by {~| Pastorius |~} on Mar 29, 2008 10:16:18 GMT -5
They're simply just too powerful. Some jutsu have high damages like that as finishing moves, but almost all of your jutsu are finishers! That's simply unacceptable.
Not only is this unacceptable, but it'll screw you over completely. If you're only able to use 1 jutsu per fight, you'll basically die.
Seriously, elaborate on each dance. Rakurai has told you to do this before, but it has yet to be done.
Anyway, if you keep making jutsu like that, I really don't see this clan being approved.
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Post by astartescorrupted on Mar 30, 2008 7:36:08 GMT -5
I meant only one of these jutsu, lol. Only one S ranked. And no, I will make no more powerful jutsu. (in fact, I won't make ny more jutsu at all, lol)
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Post by {~| Pastorius |~} on Mar 30, 2008 16:15:37 GMT -5
That's even worse. Honestly, if I were you, I'd just get rid of all of those jutsu and start from scratch. They're too much on their own, and since you're going to have other jutsu, that's just way way way way way way way too much.
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Post by astartescorrupted on Apr 8, 2008 12:43:15 GMT -5
Ditched everything except three ninjutsu that can only be used by them due to their kekkei-genkai.
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Post by {~| Pastorius |~} on Apr 12, 2008 20:17:18 GMT -5
Whatever... I guess I'll approve it. This is clearly the farthest I'm going to get with you.
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